The internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades. Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive. What is your opinion on this?

Internet
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The internet
is a one of the biggest revolution in the world which has changed the lifestyle of plethora in the society from past years. While it has
handful
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a handful
of cons, overall its pros
overweighed
rule against
override
the fact. I agree and elucidate
this
opinion in following paragraph. To embark upon,
internet
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the internet
is a boon that has given a platform
to
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for
individuals to connect to their friends and family who are sitting far away and
also
can send
message
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messages
, emails in few seconds. In ancient
time
people use post to send any kind of message, which was
time
consuming and costly.
However
, now with the help of
advancement technology pupil
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the advanced technology pupil
advanced technology pupil
advanced technology pupils
can chat and receives
immediate reply
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an immediate reply
from
opposite side
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the opposite side
opposite sides
.
Hence
,
online medium
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the online medium
is not only saving the precious
time but
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time, but
also
saving money of an individual.
Furthermore
,
internet
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the internet
is bringing evolution in working whether its business or a job by giving
opportunity
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the opportunity
an opportunity
to work through electronic media, which has inclined economical growth.
For example
, Microsoft,
google
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Google
and social sites
are giving
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are given
more job opportunities and increasing work from home culture. Owing to
this
, employees are spending more
time
with their beloved ones and stress level is getting declined.
In addition
, multinational companies are investing in numerous nations through
internet
, which is making that country economically strong. In conclusion, if mankind will not waste its
time
in
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on
useless things on
internet
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the internet
than it could be a
best
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better
evaluative
technology which
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technology, which
is not only serving economy to grow but
also
cutting
cost
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costs
and
time
to communicate.
Submitted by naresh on

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