Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?

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Medical science has advanced exponentially in the
last
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century.
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has resulted in vaccines being able to prevent many diseases that happen during
childhood
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. But, there is a debate regarding whether it should be made legally mandatory for parents to complete all
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vaccination
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vaccinations
for
childhood
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diseases or should it be left to the respective individual's choice.
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essay supports the view that
vaccination
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for
childhood
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diseases should be made legally mandatory for all the parents.
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essay will
first
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discuss the possible harms that can affect the
child
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due to
lack
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of
vaccination
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and
then
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will discuss whether parents should be allowed to take
this
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decision for their children.
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with, there can be multiple harms that can happen to a
children
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child
in case preventive
vaccination
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is not provided. The body, due to
lack
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of
vaccination
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, might not be immune to common diseases
such
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as cold,
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
and it might be developing symptoms that might show over
years
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the years
and not immediately.
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, in case polio shorts are not provided to a
child
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,
then
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the
child
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will have
high probability
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a high probability
of developing weaker or deformed legs. Considering the possible harms that can happen to a
child
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due to
lack
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of
vaccination
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, the
next
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question to be asked is whether the parents should be allowed to make
this
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judgement for their
child
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?
Although
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, the parents are responsible for everything in a toddler's life, but, something as critical as
vaccination
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should not be left to an individual's choice because
lack
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of
vaccination
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might result in severe deformity in later stages of life or even in death of the
child
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.
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, latest survey conducted by
medical association
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the medical association
medical associations
of India concluded that with the rise of
internet
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the internet
, 40% of the parents prefer
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vaccination
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solely on the basis of their own views, and not the views of their doctor. To sum up,
childhood
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vaccination
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is a matter of
immence
unusually great in size or amount or degree or especially extent or scope
immense
importance as
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can affect not only the early
years but
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years, but
also
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later years
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the later years
of a
child
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's body development and
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a parent shouldn't be allowed to make
judgment
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judgments
a judgment
for
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of
their children, since the
repurcussions
a remote or indirect consequence of some action
repercussions
for
lack
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of vaccinations are severe.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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