These days many children spend a great deal of time sitting in from of a television. Some people believe that parents should strictly limit the time that children spend watching TV as it is harmful to their development. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
In
modernt world
, it can be seen that kids watch Suggestion
the modern world
modern world
TV
a considerable time
a day. Regarding this
, there is an opinion among some that his mother & father is responsible for controlling his kid
on television
time
. This
is highly agreeable as addicting to the television
programs could affect on the future of little ones regatively
.
One, and the most in a relative manner; by comparison to something else
relatively
abvious
reason why the said opinion is true is that children tend to move away from their studies with easily perceived by the senses or grasped by the mind
obvious
TV
time
. Some kids have made their habit to
sitting in front Suggestion
of
off
the connects a noun with the preceding word
of
tV
right after coming from schools. Some even take their meals in front of it. Suggestion
TV
tv
Therefore they
will not have Accept comma addition
Therefore, they
adiquate
having the requisite qualities or resources to meet a task
adequate
time
to spend on homework of the day. That could lead to an extreme fall in their education in alder
ages.
advanced in years; ('aged' is pronounced as two syllables)
older
elder
In addition
to that, it has been proven that television
sets emit harmful rays from the screen. Exposing to those rays would lead to damage retina
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the damage retina
eyes
, according to studies. It is commonly seen that youngsters watch Suggestion
the eyes
TV
as their eyes glued to the screen, not being at a safe distance from the TV
set. Parents should observe and take it seriously so that the life-like
eyes of their evoking lifelike images within the mind
lifelike
lifeline
kid
could be proteted
.
kept safe or defended from danger or injury or loss
protected
On the other hand
, some television
programs are education programs which give an extra support on children's subjects. However
, since those programs are telecasted rarely, it cannot be given a considerable value. If such
a program must be watched, parents should be keen on letting the kid
to watch
those programs only. Suggestion
watch
For example
, if the teacher had instructed to watch an environmental documentry
, the parent should get informed and let the child watch. Even the parent could sit with him and explain it to the child.
In conclusion, the a film or TV program presenting the facts about a person or event
documentary
television
could lead to a harm than a benifit
to the progress of a child. Though there are some financial assistance in time of need
benefit
valueable
programs on having great material or monetary value especially for use or exchange
valuable
TV
, parents should control the kid
watching if properly, only for a strictly limited time
. Therefore
, the opinion said is heavily agreeable. Submitted by kassae6 on
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