For some people, consumer goods have become the most important thing in life. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Consumer
goods are taking a significant place in
lives
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the lives
of some people. In my opinion their benefits are more than drawbacks. Due to highly advantageous and accessible these
produce
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products
are taking
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is taking
a special place in
customer’s
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the customer’s life
a customer’s life
life
. Admittedly, there are some minor disadvantages of
such
development of
consumer
goods in
user’s
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the user’s life
life
. People become addicted to these
consumer
goods
.
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.
They become over dependent on these
produce
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products
productions
.
Ultimately
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Ultimately, this
this
dependency makes their
life
vulnerable if any of these product is unavailable to them.
For instance
, mobile phones are making people so dependent that without
them it’s
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them, it’s
hard to imagine
life
now-a-days.
In addition
to
this
, rather than considering these
produce
as a thing of comfort people made them a status symbol and to obtain it they are ready to own it by credit. Despite all these, if considering the positive side these products are very much beneficial in
routine
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the routine life
life
of almost every
consumer
providing them a lot of comforts. Starting from our morning routine
to day
the present time or age
today
end, We utilize
lot
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lots
of
consumer
produce
.
For instance
– electronic products etc.
Moreover
, it is widely available in every part of the country. Even in remote areas a range of
consumer
products can be seen.
In addition
to, new advancement in manufacturing techniques
make
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makes
it available at an affordable price to various customers. These products cater to various needs of customers and available in
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a plethora
of varieties. Where one can choose according to their budget and suitability rather than a thing of showing status. To conclude,
although
the addiction and show off associated with
usage
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the use
use
of these
produce
is not good for any
consumer but
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consumer, but
their benefits and comforts in our daily
life
makes them an inevitable part of our
life
. In fact, the addiction problem can be resolved by exercising self-control by the users.
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