More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries Discuss some causes and effects of this problem. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Children are the future of our nation and lately most developed countries are faced with the growing issue of children being overweight at a very young age. Let us discuss some of the causes and effects

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problem. Living in a developed

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these facilities are used to make lives easier it can sometime have a reverse effect. Advertisements play a vital role in influencing us, repeatedly running the advert builds curiosity in children who in turn force parents to purchase these products. Take

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, the product Kinder Joy always comes with a surprise cartoon character which works as a pull factor for the public who eventually purchase and consume it. Late working hours and work stress leaves little time for cooking meals at home, ordering junk food is quick,

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leads to an unhealthy lifestyle for the family. Weekends are spent at the malls or theatres where dining out becomes inevitable. We enjoy the comforts of well connected public transport systems or own private vehicles so walking becomes a waste of time. All these factors

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in overweight children as little importance given to any form of physical activity. If the above mentioned issues

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appropriately and at the correct time the effects can be serious. Being overweight can lead to multiple health

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watched a video where a 13 year old boy who was overweight collapsed while cycling with his friends, doctors advised he suffered a minor heart attack and had to be put on a strict diet. Others suffer from low self esteem and shy away from people or public outings. Overweight children will eventually grow into overweight adults, which will increase health issues and less productivity leading to an adverse

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on the economy. The wealth of a nation depends on its people, as responsible citizens we should ensure to maintain a fit and healthy lifestyle so that we can contribute positively to our country.