Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is believed by some individual that the present alteration in
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climate
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a climate
that is
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being experienced has come to stay.
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, everyone should learn to adapt to it. In my opinion, I completely disagree with
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belief because it is wrecking more havoc than to both human beings and animals than we can imagine. It
also
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affects the economy.
Firstly
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, global warming, which is the end result of the depletion of the atmosphere's ozone layer is not good for human health because the rise in earth's temperature is directly proportional to the incidence of various diseases
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as heat stroke,
diarrhea
frequent and watery bowel movements; can be a symptom of infection or food poisoning or colitis or a gastrointestinal tumor
diarrhoea
, hypertension, worsening of post menopausal symptoms e.t.c.
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Additionally
, both
terrestial
of or relating to or inhabiting the land as opposed to the sea or air
terrestrial
and aquatic animals are equally affected because the hotter the weather becomes, the more difficult it is for animals to get water to drink.
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, most of them die of drought.
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, aquatic animals
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begin to die because the sea becomes too hot for them to live in.
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, the northern part of Nigeria being the hottest region, they experience
temperatiures
the degree of hotness or coldness of a body or environment (corresponding to its molecular activity)
temperatures
temperature
up to 45 degrees
celcius
Swedish astronomer who devised the centigrade thermometer (1701-1744)
Celsius
and there has been regular reports of deaths
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of extreme heat which occurs usually during
dry season
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the dry season
. Evidently, it has become a menace in our
socities
an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
societies
and something effective must be done to stop it.
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,
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,
climate
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change has affected both individuals and the
nations
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nation's
economy as a whole.
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is because most people who ventured into fish farming have been forced to quit the business due to the fact that the water housing the fishes become so
hotnthat
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they are unable to survive.
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, the government
spend
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spends
more money on sick
people especially
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people, especially
during the dry season.
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, studies have shown that the Gambian president spend double on the health of her citizens during
summer
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the summer
.
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, efforts should be geared towards aborting every activity contributing to a rise in
climate
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change. In conclusion, people should not be comfortable with having
climate
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change. Efforts should be made to halt it so as to have an environment
that is
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conducive to support life
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • climate change
  • prevent
  • adaptation
  • mitigation
  • cope with
  • effects
  • shift
  • mindset
  • lifestyle
  • balance
  • invest
  • research
  • technology
  • crucial
  • education
  • awareness
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