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Some people think secondary school students should learn international news as one of their subjects,while other believe that this is a waste of valuable time .discuss both the views and give your opinion.

#people #school #students #news #subjects #waste #time
Nowadays due
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Nowadays, due
 to globalisation, It is splendid to be aware the youth about international information
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However
, some people advocate that international news should be the part of secondary education, whereas
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
 take it as a nuisance during crucial learning periods and state it as wastage of time
therefore
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i
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I
 would explain both the views in the following paragraphs. To elucidate with, the affirmation of international news
bring
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brings
 the awareness about surrounding international contemporary affairs which motivate the youngsters to get fascinated, to seek not only international culture but pubic policies
also
 for better education and living
lifestyle
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a lifestyle
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For instance
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according to a survey report 2018
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annually four
lakh
student
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students
 flew to the different abroad countries to pursue their
further
 studies after completing secondary and high schoolings
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Hence
, due to the advancement of technology and news media student’s upgrade their international knowledge which
broaden
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broadens
 their horizons and open the doors for abroad job opportunities.
On the other hand
,
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
 condemn that, international news as an ongoing main subject devastate the valuable timetable of the studies. Students get swamped and swayed by the captivating
informations
a message received and understood
information
,
thus
 forgotten the imperative curriculum of studies.
However
, teenagers indulging themselves into the crevasse of dignitaries information
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taking
themselves
objective case of they
them
 into the artificial fantasy world.
As a result
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 downplay the student’s performance in their main subjects
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despite of spending their crucial time of learning into books they gather the international knowledge over television and assessing mobile internets
inspite
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in spite
 of learning and choosing
professional carrier
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a professional career
a professional carrier
. In conclusion , In my opinion it is imperative to allocate the international news at secondary school level to upsurge the knowledge but
this
 should be in a synchronise manner specifically teachers should teach the children about the positive and negative consequences wisdoms as well as value of time and studies
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