More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries. Discuss some causes and effects of this problem. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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mainly affect the agriculture part of the nation
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For example
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the USA 80 percent
of the people work
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the second day of the week; the first working day
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due to heavy body more adolescent are getting sick. The reason behind
there
of them or themselves
their
sickness is there
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the state of not being susceptible
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power degrades when they become more bulky
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metabolism and lower
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of them or themselves
their
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problem make them tire so easily
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India is the
second
largest populated country
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Every year 11000 pupil
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fat content
which led to a cancer
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usually describes a large person who is fat but has a large frame to carry it
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country might have to build extra hospitals only for fat infants. In conclusion
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the act of consuming food
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food is allowable
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but when it goes uncontrollable it bothers
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of them or themselves
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heavier
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Mainly it can be controlled through proper guidance
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • obesity
  • sedentary
  • caloric intake
  • processed foods
  • fast food culture
  • screen time
  • metabolic disorders
  • healthcare expenditure
  • lifestyle diseases
  • preventative strategies
  • nutritional education
  • public health policy
  • body mass index (BMI)
  • emotional well-being
  • stigmatization
  • exercise regimen
  • eating habits
  • junk food
  • socioeconomic factors
  • health literacy
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