Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think that is the case? What is most important thing to succeed in life?

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Success in

life

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do not merely depends on schooling. There are individuals who fail in their schools,

but become successful

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but to become successful

later in

life

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. There is a reason for

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phenomenon and

also

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there are certain other factors which accounts for success in

life

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. Some people are not productive in schools and

hence

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started their own

business

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or working and become successful. Education alone do not ensure success, so people who are not good in studies, left studies or become fail in it, start to run a

business

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small or large scale

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a small or large scale

. Starting their own

business

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from

such

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a young age and doing it for years makes them successful, as they work for themselves independently. Microsoft

owner

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owns

, Bill Gates,

for instance

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, was a dropper from his university, due to the poor

performance he

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performance, he

had, but later he

become

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becomes

successful by starting his own company of windows and computers.

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, opting for a job in early age makes an individual to experience the dynamics of practical

life

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Doing many jobs with different companies foster

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Will many jobs with different companies foster

Have many jobs with different companies fostered

him or her to become successful, owing to the experience attained. Hard work and devotion are

also

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the key factors to become successful in

life

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, no matter a person go through it in education or without it. If an individual

want

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wants

to rise in

life

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, he or she

have

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has

to pass through the process of consistent struggles and

doing

the act that results in something coming to be

making

full efforts rigorously, as it would polish his or her skills and become expert in it.

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is because everything in

life

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either it is learning, job, or aiming to achieve a certain goal, required a person to give full efforts and energy to it. A study by the Harvard University in 2018,

for instance

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, found that 95% of students in the USA who have

achieve

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achieved

top employment careers, did extreme hard work in their study period. In conclusion, some individuals tend to be

failed

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filled

filed

and unproductive in education;

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, they become successful in

life

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. The

man

any very large body of (salt) water

main

reason is that they opt for a

business

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or a job, which flourish their careers. Hardworking and dedication in doing something are

also

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critical to achieve success.

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Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think that is the case? What is most important thing to succeed in life?

Your opinion

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult to live such as Sahara desert or Antarctica. Do advantages outweight the disadvantage of live there .

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Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in groups, while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Question B Large companies should pay higher salaries to CEOs and executives compared to other workers. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (Write 250 words.)