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Marketing and promotion is the key to a successful business. To what extent do you agree?

#promotion #business
Some people strongly believe that a success of a business
lais
tell an untruth; pretend with intent to deceive
lies
 solely in their marketing and promoting, themselves.
However
,
this
 essay is going to partially disagree with
this
 point of view as there are other factors that can either develop or destroy businesses. On the one hand, marketing is crucial for entrepreneurs to classify their niche in the market. So that they can know who are their potential customers through some information
such
 as where they live, hang out, shop and so on. By doing
this
, brands can set the best
estrategy
an elaborate and systematic plan of action
strategy
 to promote their products or services in a way they can reach the most people who need them.
As a result
, the sales and profits are obviously higher.
On the other hand
, customer
fedelization
creation by the physical union of male and female gametes; of sperm and ova in an animal or pollen and ovule in a plant
fertilization
 is
also
 important to keep a business running profitably.
Otherwise
, all that investment in marketing and advertisement can be lost since the customers decide to not buy the
product
 again.
For example
, if the
product
 did not
performer
Suggestion
perform
performed
 as expected and the costumer did not get any compensation for that they are likely to no longer purchase it and leave a negative review on the internet.
Thus
, generating an income fall because people are suspicious to consume the
product
. To conclude, it is clear that marketing and promotion play a
significante
important in effect or meaning
significant
 role when it comes to flourishing a business.
Nevertheless
,
this
 cannot be the only focus. Entrepreneurs have
also
 to make sure they have got a high quality
product
 and a great customer service to deal with the
pos
the position where someone (as a guard or sentry) stands or is assigned to stand
post
pros
-sales as well. Since a customer satisfied can generate a word-mouth campaign and more sales.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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