Some people say that feeling of competition should be encouraged in children others say they should be taught to become cooperative. What is your opinion?

In

this

21st century, it has become increasingly important for parents to see their children

successfull

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successfully

successful

. There has been a common debate amongst many people about how there should be a sense of

competetion

a business relation in which two parties compete to gain customers

competition

within children while others opine that to be cooperative is more important.

This

essay would discuss how it is important for the children to learn to work together in cooperation.

To begin

with, the world is becoming smaller today. People from different parts of the world are coming together and working with each other to

acheive

to gain with effort

achieve

the best for the entire mankind. The qualities learnt in the childhood act as the basis of the future believes and

hence

, it is important for the children to learn to be more

accomodative

helpful in bringing about a harmonious adaptation

accommodating

and cooperative to survive in the future.

For instance

, more than 45% employees working for NASA in the USA are from countries like India and China.

Moreover

, cooperation brings out the best in a man. There is a constant feedback from the colleagues and mates when people work together. In a survey conducted by Google within their employees, it was deduced that team projects had a better rate of task

acheivement

the action of accomplishing something

achievement

as compared to the projects undertaken by an individual. Coordination reduces the efforts on a single person and it

also

decreases the individual pressure. To coordinate with the team members

is

Accept comma addition

is, thus

thus

, very important. To put in a nutshell, a healthy

competetion

a business relation in which two parties compete to gain customers

competition

is paramount

for

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to

the overall growth of a child, but to work in a coordinated manner is important for better survival in the professional life and it

also

increases the efficiency of a person as it brings out the most impressive aspects of one's personality.