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Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

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Computers
are
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were
 very popular in those days, people love to
use
computer
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the computer
a computer
computers
 for so many different things like learning, entertainment.
Nowadays many
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Nowadays, many
 people think that
computer
are teach
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teaches
 in a classroom and children are able to
use
computer
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the computer
computers
a computer
 for learning
purpose
.
However
,
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
 think that dependence on
computer
 may have a certain kind of
risk but
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risk, but
 according to my opinion school should provide
computer
 for children
to
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with
 learning
purpose
.
Firstly
,
dependence
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depending
 on
computer
 is not a good think because there are many negative
effect
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effects
for
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of
 using computers
for example
, children
use
 computers for their learning
purpose
, but there are many children who played games in
computer
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the computer
a computer
 rather than learning.
Moreover
, using
computer
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a computer
the computer
 for
long time
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a long time
also
 have
bad effect
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bad effects
a bad effect
 on health
for example
, if children
use
computer
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the computer
 for longer hours than
it
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
 cause eyesight problem.
Secondly
, computers are increasing rapidly and classroom
allow
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allows
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
 to learn computers and done their learning task with the
help
 of computers because with the
help
 of
this
childrens
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child
children
 are able to
use
 new technology and
also
 find interest in learning
for example
, there are some
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
 who are boring, while learning and doing some academic work, but with the
help
 of computers they find interest of doing academic work easily. To conclude, it is true that using computers for
long time
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a long time
 would effect on
children
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children's
child
 health, but according to my opinion classroom should provide computers for learning
purpose
 because with the
help
 of
this
children
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child
 are able to learn how to
use
 computers and for those who feel
borning
the act of burning something
burning
 while learning are able to find interest in learning.
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