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Both poor and rich find the accessibility into university difficult. Do you agree or disagree?

#accessibility #university
Entry into
university
 irrespective of
socio-economic
involving social as well as economic factors
socioeconomic
 status has always been a controversial topic,
besides
 controversies the alarming question is that whether tertiary education is even accessible to all the students or not? I agree with the statement and believe that it has become extremely hard for the students to even enter
university
 owing to the disproportion in the student number and seat availability compounded with increased percentage of scholars and fee structure.
To begin
 with, the secondary school graduated student numbers has tremendously increased in recent decades, resulting in disproportionate numbers between the eligible students and available seats, creating
burden
Suggestion
a burden
 on the
university
 management, compelling to raise the standards of eligibility.
For instance
, 1 million students graduated from schools in India in 2018, whereas the seats available
is
Suggestion
are
 around 0.1 million, making it hard for students
to enter
Suggestion
entering
an
Suggestion
a
university
.
Furthermore
, despite making academic standards high, the management
also
 demanded huge amounts as compensation to allocate particular seats.
Hence
, making it unapproachable for the students of both high and low
socio-economic
involving social as well as economic factors
socioeconomic
 groups.
For example
, according to a recent article in TIMES newspaper, it is mentioned that, it costs a life for the student’s parents to afford a
university
 seat anywhere in the world whether it is a developed country or a developing country. To conclude,
finally after
Accept comma addition
finally, after
 studying hard for years and passing with good grades, still the students are unable to be sure of fulfilling their dreams of entering top universities, irrespective of their
economical
Suggestion
economic
 background.
Thus
 strengthening my agreement that financial status does not play a key role in obtaining a student access to
university
.
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