Some people feel that the cost of space exploration is far too high for the benefits it brings while others argue that we space programs should continue no matter what the cost. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Exploring into the
space
had been only a dream for several decades ago,
however it
Accept comma addition
however, it
has been scaled back already due to the massive investment and less positive outcomes.
However
, while some people feel that studying the universe should
last
, I strongly believe that it can be
cancelld
(of events) no longer planned or scheduled
cancelled
concealed
. On the one hand, it can be argued that
space
exploration
brought a number of spin-off technologies in our modern life.
For example
, GPS, satellite TV or weather
forcast
predict in advance
forecast
systems were
initially
created in aerospace industries that we enjoy the benefit of the invention in our daily lives.
In addition
, advocates of learning the universe
also
claim that future advantages can be expected.
For example
, due to the demographic
explosure
vulnerability to the elements; to the action of heat or cold or wind or rain
exposure
in our planet, aerospace industries are now trying to find places to
immigrate
leave one's country of residence for a new one
emigrate
where is appropriate for people who live
in
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on
the Earth.
However
, despite the advantages of
space
exploration
, I side with those who feel that exploring into the
space
should be discontinued.
Firstly
, since the premier launch of
space
shuttle, habitants of the earth left a lot of wreckages and rubbish of shuttles and
space
machines in the universe, which can bring about a severe
space
pollution problem later on. Another concern of studying the
space
is the victims caused from
space
exploration
. Take astronauts example, there are many astronauts who injured from the excursion of
space
that some of them even suffer from lifetime physical damages. What's more, not only human beings were injured in the course of the
space
exploration
, but many animals
also
got involved with it as experiments.
Finally
, my strongest argue is that the budget invested
to
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in
space
research is too massive but gain little beneficial outcomes. When it comes to poor people who suffer from famine locally and globally,
this
exorbitantamount
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exorbitant amount
of money for
space
investment is unjustifiable. In short,
although
space
research offered several beneficial technologies to our daily lives, the high cost budget for little impacts
from
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for
studying
space
is justifiable.
Therefore
, on balance, I wholeheartedly believe that exploring into
space
should be scaled back.
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