Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflex the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued by some people that the surge in the sales of some common goods is due to the effects of

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and not

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of societal needs. I agree with

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view because

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creatse

make or cause to be or to become

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artificial needs and it encourages the purchase of items which may not be necessary due to the impression of

success

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and glamour associated with them, One major effect of

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is that it

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creates

artificial needs.

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, it makes it difficult for people to distinguish between their wants and their needs.

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, people are manipulated to purchase certain goods which are not essential and forgo more important items.

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, children may pester their parents to buy certain toys that

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regularly advertise

on the television even when there are pressing needs.

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, people often buy consumer goods that they do not really need.

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impresses

success

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and glamour on some goods which makes people to buy them. In an effort to increase the sales of

some

one or some or every or all without specification

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goods, famous individuals are

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to advertise these items so that people will associate their

success

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to those products or link some goods to affluence and power.

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is often used in the promotion of products

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wears

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worn

with their accessories and electronic devices.

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, there have been a surge in sales of Apple phones to youths in Nigeria due to the fact that its advertisements link the products with successful individuals. If these goods are not glamourised through advertisements, many people would not have purchased them. In conclusion, I agree that advertisements have increased the sales of some consumer products which are not necessary.

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occurs because advertisements create artificial needs and it links some non-essential products to

success

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and glamour.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Consumer goods
Advertising
Perceived needs
Manipulation
Bandwagon effect
Cultural norms
Overconsumption
Consumer awareness
Societal values
Public demand
Persuasive power
Status symbol
Economic impact
Sustainable demands

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TASK 2: Young people are now spending more and more time and money following fashion trends. What is your opinion? Is this a positive or negative development?

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