You and your family are living in rented accomodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter . Introduce yourself . Explain what is wrong with the furniture. . Say what action you would like the landlord to take Write at least 150 words
Dear
Mr.
Sam,
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Mr
This
is Mrs.
Sumira from India, residing at the 260 Avenue of your guest lane, Arbuthnaut, Canada with my parents and kid. I am really happy that I have been given Change the punctuation
Mrs
such
a
nice accommodation with all the furniture. Correct article usage
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Moreover
, the inside ambience is awesome and worthwhile..
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.
...
Mr.
Sam, I am writing to you in order to bring to your notice regarding few problems being faced by me and my family members pertaining to the furniture provided by you, like, the Air Conditioner is completely spoiled as the Change the punctuation
Mr
rain water
is hitting inside the bedroom due to it's rusted bolts. Correct your spelling
rainwater
Also
, the cots are swinging, once after sit or sleep. While it is creating discomfort while sleeping as it also
makes Add an article
a sound
the sound
sound
Fix the agreement mistake
sounds
,
when we change the position of sleep.
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On the other hand
, the chimney provided in the cooking area is not absorbing the heat and smoke, rather is hitting that back into the house. Obviously, this
spreads not only in the kitchen but also
through the entire house, as it is an open cook-ware house. Besides
, the flush is not working in the commode of the left balcony's washroom. As this
is used by kids, they are not able to use it properly and the
maintenance has become difficult.
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Therefore
, request you to kindly look into the solution, keeping in view of above
problems, at the earliest and shall be grateful for the same. Looking forward Correct article usage
the above
for
your response and action.
Thanking you,
Regards,
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to
Sumira
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Sumatra
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
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- however
- although
- even though
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