Some people think that all university students should study whatever course they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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is a citadel of learning as well as an embodiment of knowledge.

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, learners should decide what they want to learn. In the same vein, people should have total control in the choice of

course

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they want to major in. Others, opined

otherwise

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, they suggest that education seekers should partake in technology related courses as

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have better

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outcome.

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essay would vividly elucidate both sides of the divide, before a reasoned conclusion reached. On

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hand, people attending the

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should pick the

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they want to study,

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is because they would be more interested in that line of education. To simplify

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, if a student identifies with a line of study, he follows it passionately. For an instance, when I wanted to

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the

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, my country offered me a scholarship in system engineering because they wanted to build a space ship

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, in spite of that, I accepted the

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few years later I was withdrawn in my

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year in that

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because I had no interest in engineering.

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, I failed all my core departmental subjects.

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, it is undoubtedly important that, Interest should come

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when choosing a career irrespective of the

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advantage that particular

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has. Seekers of knowledge,

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, should consider learning information in computer engineering in their various

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. In doing so, they can be relevant in

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. To put it another way, because of the advancement in technology and science some courses down the line will be of no use as

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such, they

will face out, any expert in

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field

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will be of no good to himself neither, to the country at large. For illustration, the united nation

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labours

congress released the 2017, official

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gazette, which

reports that some professionals in business and sociology will face out of the economy of the

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and USA

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people should disengage themselves from studying

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in the

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or in the colleges. It

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that, the top 10 employers of labour will require individuals from

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science related fields

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, what is the benefit of a

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if it has no relevance after a few

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years, even

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is passionate about

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course

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. To conclude, after

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both school of thought, I am of the opinion that

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, a seeker of information should consider a

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that

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has

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relevance.

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should consider is interest

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, as

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will help to fuel the dying zeal when the challenges of that subject seems overwhelming or if

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is not making enough remuneration from it.

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