Some people think that all university students should study whatever course they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

The
university
is a citadel of learning as well as an embodiment of knowledge.
Thus
, learners should decide what they want to learn. In the same vein, people should have total control in the choice of
course
they want to major in. Others, opined
otherwise
, they suggest that education seekers should partake in technology related courses as
this
have better
future
outcome.
This
essay would vividly elucidate both sides of the divide, before a reasoned conclusion reached. On
one
hand, people attending the
university
should pick the
course
they want to study,
this
is because they would be more interested in that line of education. To simplify
further
, if a student identifies with a line of study, he follows it passionately. For an instance, when I wanted to
enroll
register formally as a participant or member
enrol
into
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in
the
university
, my country offered me a scholarship in system engineering because they wanted to build a space ship
then
, in spite of that, I accepted the
scheme but
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scheme, but
few years later I was withdrawn in my
second
year in that
university
because I had no interest in engineering.
Also
, I failed all my core departmental subjects.
Hence
, it is undoubtedly important that, Interest should come
first
when choosing a career irrespective of the
future
advantage that particular
field
has. Seekers of knowledge,
on the other hand
, should consider learning information in computer engineering in their various
institution
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institutions
. In doing so, they can be relevant in
future
. To put it another way, because of the advancement in technology and science some courses down the line will be of no use as
such they
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such, they
will face out, any expert in
such
field
will be of no good to himself neither, to the country at large. For illustration, the united nation
labour
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labours
congress released the 2017, official
gazette which
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gazette, which
reports that some professionals in business and sociology will face out of the economy of the
Uk
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UK
and USA
thus
people should disengage themselves from studying
such
course
in the
university
or in the colleges. It
also state
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also states
is also stated
that, the top 10 employers of labour will require individuals from
science related
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science related fields
field
.
Moreover
, what is the benefit of a
field
if it has no relevance after a few
years even
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years, even
if
one
is passionate about
such
course
. To conclude, after
analyzing
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analysing
both school of thought, I am of the opinion that
although
, a seeker of information should consider a
field
that
have
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has
future
relevance.
Conversely
,
one
should consider is interest
first
, as
this
will help to fuel the dying zeal when the challenges of that subject seems overwhelming or if
one
is not making enough remuneration from it.
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