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Some people think that success is the best measure of intelligence whilst others think that intelligent can be measured in other ways. what is your opinion?

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It is considered by many that,
success
 is the major and accurate
indictor
a number or ratio (a value on a scale of measurement) derived from a series of observed facts; can reveal relative changes as a function of time
indicator
indicators
 of
intelligence
.
However
, others argue that,
intelligence
 can be evaluated by other methods, along with
success
. In
this
 essay, we will discuss, how
intelligence
 can be measured by counting achievements and using various other techniques. It is
argueds
present reasons and arguments
argued
 by many that,
intelligence
 is linked to
success
. A person is considered intelligent if he has excelled in his
life
.
For instance
, for job interviews in multinational companies, promotions are considered as golden points to avail a better job.
Intelligence
 and
success
is interconnected
Suggestion
are interconnected
 to human
life
 in multiple aspects of
life
.
Although
success
 is considered as
accurate indicator
Suggestion
an accurate indicator
 of
intelligence
, other ways of
measurment
the act or process of assigning numbers to phenomena according to a rule
measurement
 cannot be denied. Knowledge is interlinked with
intelligence
. A person is considered intelligent if he
knowledgeble
highly educated; having extensive information or understanding
knowledgeable
 about things related to daily
life
.
In addition
, the ability to learn new skills is
also
 considered as
vital aspect
Suggestion
a vital aspect
vital aspects
 of
intelligence
. Developing skills lead to creativity, ultimately, enhancing
intelligence
.As an illustration, many schools in Pakistan, check
IQ level
Suggestion
the IQ level
 of children by checking their skills to solve riddles and other tricky questions. To conclude,
success
 has a profound impact on evaluation of
intelligence
. Knowledge and skills
also indicates
Suggestion
also indicate
intelligence
 in
unique way
Suggestion
a unique way
unique ways
.
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