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In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Travelling ABROAD FOR STUDIES IS SIGNIFICANTLY INCREASED in young generation. In my opinion studying in
different country
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a different country
different countries
begets
 positive development Owing to
recent trend
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the recent trend
a recent trend
recent trends
 of studying abroad, many students dream to pursue their
carear
the particular occupation for which you are trained
career
careers
 and higher education overseas. In underdeveloped countries, the scarcity of
updated
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updates
 equipment and learning environment is the main reason for shifting in another country.
For instance
, Nepal offers
scholorships
financial aid provided to a student on the basis of academic merit
scholarships
scholarship
 to their students to study medicine in
pakistan
a Muslim republic that occupies the heartland of ancient south Asian civilization in the Indus River valley; formerly part of India; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
Pakistan
 in order to make them knowledgeable and
skillfull
having or showing knowledge and skill and aptitude
skilful
, as Pakistan is eminent for advancement in the field of medicine.
thus
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Thus
, a major
propotion
the quotient obtained when the magnitude of a part is divided by the magnitude of the whole
proportion
proportions
preparation
 of students shift abroad to enhance their knowledge.
Moreover
, STUDYING overseas not only update and increase
knowledge but
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knowledge, but
 it has a profound impact on personality development. Living in a new and
stressfull
extremely irritating to the nerves
stressful
environment boost
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environment, boost
 up confidence.
For instance
, youngsters travel overseas to achieve their goals in terms of higher education, explore
strange environment
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the strange environment
 which is different in every aspect
such
 as language, customs and food,
as a result
 coping skills are enhanced.
Furthermore
, students learn a diverse way of living. To illustrate, my brother who had
got
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gotten
opportunity
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an opportunity
the opportunity
 to study in china on
scholorship
financial aid provided to a student on the basis of academic merit
scholarships
 funded by the government of Pakistan, learned healthy lifestyle modifications by the old
chinese
a native or inhabitant of Communist China or of Nationalist China
Chinese
 traditions.
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