Nowadays people make new friends through social networks and internet chat groups. Some people think this is good. Other thinks that face-to-facec interaction is essential. Discuess both view and give your opinion.

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Some would argue that, it is good to make new friends through social networking sites. While others say one-on-one interaction is very much important.

Although

, social media platform is

ment

mean or intend to express or convey

meant

to connect people beyond countries.

However

, I believe personal meeting

creats

make or cause to be or to become

creates

a magic in becoming genuine friendships. On the one hand, these day people spend most of their time on

internet

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the internet

to work or study. So it is a kind of relief to make new friends through

this

online platform. One of the fascinating things about these platforms getting to know other countries cultures.

For example

, through

Facebook social site

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the Facebook social site

, many people meet from all over the world. Getting to know each

othere

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

others

and their culture. But, I believe meeting someone personally get to know very well.

On the other hand

, true friends know about their feeling and it can happen only through personal meet and having a good conversation. By meeting and talking to someone we come to know about persons aura negative, positive and

geniunity

For instance

, Indian actor

salman

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Salman

khan applied online for a movie role to a production company and he got rejected. But, when he met producer

personally

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personally, then

then

Producer Company came to know about the real talent and the hunger for doing work. To conclude, I think true friendship is only possible through

geniun

obtain

gaining

genius

genuine

face to face conversation,

instead

of virtual

friedship

the state of being friends (or friendly)

friendship

. Because personal meeting gives an

ultimatee

furthest or highest in degree or order; utmost or extreme

ultimate

estimate

intimate

attachment towards

other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

person.

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Nowadays people make new friends through social networks and internet chat groups. Some people think this is good. Other thinks that face-to-facec interaction is essential. Discuess both view and give your opinion.

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Nowdays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? what are the effects on society?

International travelers can cause problems in the countries to which they travel. On the other hand, international travelers can bring real advantages with them. Do the problems international travelers cause greater than the advantages they bring?

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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