Nowadays people make new friends through social networks and internet chat groups. Some people think this is good. Other thinks that face-to-facec interaction is essential. Discuess both view and give your opinion.

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Some would argue that, it is good to make new friends through social networking sites. While others say one-on-one interaction is very much important.
Although
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, social media platform is
ment
mean or intend to express or convey
meant
to connect people beyond countries.
However
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, I believe personal meeting
creats
make or cause to be or to become
creates
a magic in becoming genuine friendships. On the one hand, these day people spend most of their time on
internet
Suggestion
the internet
to work or study. So it is a kind of relief to make new friends through
this
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online platform. One of the fascinating things about these platforms getting to know other countries cultures.
For example
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, through
Facebook social site
Suggestion
the Facebook social site
, many people meet from all over the world. Getting to know each
othere
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
others
and their culture. But, I believe meeting someone personally get to know very well.
On the other hand
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, true friends know about their feeling and it can happen only through personal meet and having a good conversation. By meeting and talking to someone we come to know about persons aura negative, positive and
geniunity
Suggestion
.
For instance
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, Indian actor
salman
Suggestion
Salman
khan applied online for a movie role to a production company and he got rejected. But, when he met producer
personally
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personally, then
then
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Producer Company came to know about the real talent and the hunger for doing work. To conclude, I think true friendship is only possible through
geniun
obtain
gaining
genius
genuine
face to face conversation,
instead
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of virtual
friedship
the state of being friends (or friendly)
friendship
. Because personal meeting gives an
ultimatee
furthest or highest in degree or order; utmost or extreme
ultimate
estimate
intimate
attachment towards
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
person.
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