Nowadays people make new friends through social networks and internet chat groups. Some people think this is good. Other thinks that face-to-facec interaction is essential. Discuess both view and give your opinion.

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Some would argue that, it is good to make new friends through social networking sites. While others say one-on-one interaction is very much important.

Although

, social media platform is

ment

mean or intend to express or convey

meant

to connect people beyond countries.

However

, I believe personal meeting

creats

make or cause to be or to become

creates

a magic in becoming genuine friendships. On the one hand, these day people spend most of their time on

internet

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the internet

to work or study. So it is a kind of relief to make new friends through

this

online platform. One of the fascinating things about these platforms getting to know other countries cultures.

For example

, through

Facebook social site

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the Facebook social site

, many people meet from all over the world. Getting to know each

othere

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

others

and their culture. But, I believe meeting someone personally get to know very well.

On the other hand

, true friends know about their feeling and it can happen only through personal meet and having a good conversation. By meeting and talking to someone we come to know about persons aura negative, positive and

geniunity

For instance

, Indian actor

salman

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Salman

khan applied online for a movie role to a production company and he got rejected. But, when he met producer

personally

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personally, then

then

Producer Company came to know about the real talent and the hunger for doing work. To conclude, I think true friendship is only possible through

geniun

obtain

gaining

genius

genuine

face to face conversation,

instead

of virtual

friedship

the state of being friends (or friendly)

friendship

. Because personal meeting gives an

ultimatee

furthest or highest in degree or order; utmost or extreme

ultimate

estimate

intimate

attachment towards

other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

person.

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