The two map below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The two map below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
the two maps demonstrate the same
island
before and after the construction of some
visitors
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visitor's
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advantages.
Overall
, the
island
goes through dramatic modification because of construction. Now,
this
island
also
provides some swimming facilities. Before the construction, the
island
was an unsettled isolated place with a length of approximately 250 meters. There were only some trees and a small beach area which had no activities. After the facilities
provided
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, now the
island
has a pier which is used for sailing the boat. The pier is connected to a huge reception building with a vehicle track which has a
further
connection with the restaurant building. There are two areas for accommodation. One is situated on the left and the other is situated in the middle of the
island
. Each room
of
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in
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the accommodation area is connected by a circular footpath. The right side of the
island
is still uninhabited. The beach area which was once unused now used for activities like swimming.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "provides" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Island
  • Tourist facilities
  • Construction
  • Overview
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Before
  • After
  • Map
  • Summarize
  • Select
  • Report
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