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Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work. How do you think children should spend their free time? Give reasons for your answer and give relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Generally people emphasise more on studies than on extra curricular activities. It is believed by some people that children are getting too much free
time
, and that
time
 should be used for school work. Whereas, I believe that children should get
significant amount
Suggestion
a significant amount
 of free
time
 for sports, physical activities and to experience and explore their surroundings.
Firstly
, children should get free
time
 it is very important for their overall development and wellbeing. The children should spend free
time
 by getting engaged in sports and other physical activities, it is important for their physical and mental strength. As they say healthy body is equal to
healthy mind
Suggestion
a healthy mind
healthy minds
.
For example
, the researches prove that, the children who study all the
time
 lack focus and concentration, whereas the children who get
time
 to play outside have better focus and concentration levels. So, the children should get
significant amount
Suggestion
a significant amount
 of
time
 to play.
Secondly
, the young minds are very curious and creative, they should be allowed to spend their free
time
 in the activity that they enjoy.
For example
, some children like to draw or some children are into reverse engineering and they like to de-assemble and assemble their toys and they should be allowed to do all these sort of activities, because they all are enabling them to master some real life skills, like, problem solving
,
Accept space
,
analytical skills etc. It is
therefore
 beneficial for children to study and
also
 spend free
time
 exploring activities they enjoy. To conclude, people think that children should use their free
time
 to do more school
work but
Accept comma addition
work, but
, I believe they should spend free
time
 playing sports and exploring new things and do the activities they enjoy doing.
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