Some British families decide not to buy televisions because they influence the development of the creativity of children. What do you think?

With the rapid development of science and
technology
,
television
, as a new invention
in
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of
the 20th century
is becoming
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was becoming
very populous in people’s life. People can be informed of the latest news and enjoy the
colorful
having striking color
colourful
programs at home. In my opinion,
television
will not affect children’s creativity as exaggerated.
Firstly
,
television
is the most effective tool to inform children of the latest news and scientific development over the world.
Television
tells us the recent development of some researches,
such
as
clone
a weightlift in which the barbell is lifted to shoulder height and then jerked overhead
clean
technology
, Genetic breakthroughs, the new computing
technology
and so on, which can stimulate the imagination of children and encourage them to carry out relevant experiments, making new findings and breakthroughs in their study.
Secondly
, some programs like adventures and geography can enlarge children’s
knowledge
of
scope
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the scope
. With the emerge of information
technology
, the
knowledge
in textbooks cannot satisfy children’s curiosity any more. Children need to learn wider
knowledge
and know more about our world. Programs like adventures can cultivate children’s creativity and the ability to tackle
difficulty
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difficult
; programs like geography can teach
children
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children with knowledge about
child's knowledge about
child's child's knowledge about
children's knowledge about
knowledge
about different countries in the world and initiate their aspiration to know about the nature; programs about science can inspire children’s interest in science and
technology
.
However
, the improper programs on
television
sometimes play negative role in the growth of children. The shots about violence, crimes and pornography contents are making children walk on the criminal road. To sum up, I believe that
television
will not influence children’s creativity. But meanwhile, the government and the whole society should do their utmost to prohibit the unhealthy contents on TV and provide the children with a clean growing environment.
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