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Some parents believe children’s leisure activities should be always educational, but others think it will cause more pressure on children. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In
this
 era, parents concerned about their children's
leisure
 activities
morethan
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more than
 ever. Some people
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
 on education
realted
being connected either logically or causally or by shared characteristics
related
leisure
 activities and spend lots of money to send their
off springs
the immediate descendants of a person
offsprings
 to different extra curriculum classes and in other
hand some
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hand, some
 people give full liberty to their children about their spare
time
. Now the question is what is the best way for children to spend their
leisure
time
? In following
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 will discuss
this
 issue in detail.
First
 of all, the idea of giving freedom to toddlers about how to utilize their spare
time
, there might be few citizens who assure that good idea let the kid's decide how they want allocate their free
time
.
However
, I totally disagree, and the reason is, we all know that infants are not able to distinguish what is
postive
characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.
positive
 for them and what is bad for them and as far as they concerned they only want play and
jubliant
joyful and proud especially because of triumph or success
jubilant
.
Therefore
, giving freedom to infants about their break period is not a constructive idea.
However
, having educational recreational activities is
a
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an
 adequate alternative. Parents can supervise their children’s spare times, they can figure out what their adolescent like
most
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Most
 and what are their interests, through those
interest
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interests
 they can plan their tasks so they can have joy and get educated simultaneously.
For instance
, when I was a
child my
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child, my
 parents had sent me to a Football school, so I spent lots of my recreational times learning Football, and the reason was that my parents knew that I loved physical activities. In conclusion, I personally believe on
educational
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educational, leisure
leisure
 activities for children but it
is
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Is
It's
 important to not put extra pressure on newborns and make sure they enjoy while
they
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They
 have
educational
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educational, leisure
leisure
 activities.
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