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Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

#activity #child #skills #creativity
It cannot be denied that in
current scenario
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the current scenario
 the obesity level
is like a wild fire due to that gaudians think
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is like a wild fire due to that guidance thought
is like a wild fire due to that guidance think
 that indulging in physical activity could help their wards to
broden
make broader
broaden
 their horizons.
Althought
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Although
 reading books would
improves
perform without preparation
improvise
, their mental skills. A fundamental reason for
this
thete
in or at that place
there
site
that
are
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is
 an
assorment
a collection containing a variety of sorts of things
assortment
 of things which not only boosts
offspring
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offspring's
knowledge but
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knowledge, but
also
 help them to think out of the box.
Further more
in addition
Furthermore
,
new techniques
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the new techniques
 could
hepl
give help or assistance; be of service
help
 them to learn
easily so
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easily, so
 that, student power of
grassping
understanding with difficulty
grasping
 will be
rise
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rising
.
In particular
, one of my friend he did
cooking
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the cooking
 at his home in his
leausre
time available for ease and relaxation
leisure
 time as he could devote his time more creative manner. The
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 aspect is, multitude of game would increase the health as well as concentration.
However
, reading should be done by infants to
understamd
know and comprehend the nature or meaning of
understand
understands
this
 skill and words.
subsequently
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Subsequently
, it
also
 maintains
balance
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the balance
a balance
 between mental and physical ability.
For instance
, playing outdoor sports while
this
 has
numerous of benefits
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numerous benefits
, so infants could be safe from detrimental
deseases
an impairment of health or a condition of abnormal functioning
diseases
. To conclude,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 am totally agree with the
statment
a message that is stated or declared; a communication (oral or written) setting forth particulars or facts etc
statement
 there should be equally
maintain
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maintained
 in reading and all other
activies
any specific behavior
activities
 due to which youngsters could explore more things.
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