There are fewer controls over the design and construction of home and office building. So, people can build them however they like. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages ?

Building's structures and
appearences
outward or visible aspect of a person or thing
appearances
appearance
have long
been regarded important
Suggestion
been regarded as important
in the cultural landscape of many cities. In some countries, there are strict rules in regards to the way houses are
constracted
make by combining materials and parts
constructed
contracted
while in others there
are
Suggestion
is
none. Despite the many disadvantages that are often associated with increased building
regulation
, I believe these
regulation
Suggestion
regulations
are important in maintaining the city's culture and
beauty
. Regulating the way office buildings are constructed may have several
negetive
characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features
negative
aspects.
First
, forcing the architects to a specific building pattern may cause functional problems which can have a direct effect on the property. As an
example
an item of information that is typical of a class or group
example
example
, a local rule which states that entering the private parking space can be achieved through a side street rather than the main road may lead to serious traffic jams.
Second
, several
desicions
the act of making up your mind about something
decisions
may lead to a substantial increase in the property value. In Jerusalem,
for
example
, all houses
should be build
Suggestion
should be built
should build
using a specific stone leading to a massive increase in the
realestate
Suggestion
real estate
costs.
Last
, increased
regulation
may
effect
have an effect upon
affect
the artistic
freedome
the condition of being free; the power to act or speak or think without externally imposed restraints
freedom
of the designers which can have a
negetive
characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features
negative
offect
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
effect
affect
on the cities
beauty
and diversity.
In contrast
to the above mentioned, I believe the advantages of housing regulations outweigh its disadvantages.
Initially
, I strongly believe that a
municipal
Suggestion
municipality
should maintain its cultural history. A recent report from the New York University has shown that an architectural consistency is one of the most important aspects
in
Suggestion
of
the
citie's
Suggestion
site's
cities
beauty
and have a direct effect on the liveliness of the people who live within it.
Also
, maintaining a specific landscape of a town by preventing buildings to be above a certain height effects the social interactions of the persons within it. People who live in
sky scrapers
a very tall building with many stories
skyscrapers
,
for
example
, tend to socialize less
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
people who live in two
store
Suggestion
storage
buildings.
Lastly
, every city has its own
beauty
which was kept for many centuries and in my opinion, should be looked after. In
cunclusion
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
conclusions
consolation
,
Althugh
even though, in spite of the fact that
although
regulation
may have a social and financial consequences, I still believe they should exist as they protect our cities.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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