There are fewer controls over the design and construction of home and office building. So, people can build them however they like. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages ?

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Building's structures and

appearences

outward or visible aspect of a person or thing

appearances

appearance

have long

been regarded important

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been regarded as important

in the cultural landscape of many cities. In some countries, there are strict rules in regards to the way houses are

constracted

make by combining materials and parts

constructed

contracted

while in others there

are

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none. Despite the many disadvantages that are often associated with increased building

regulation

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, I believe these

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regulation

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regulations

are important in maintaining the city's culture and

beauty

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. Regulating the way office buildings are constructed may have several

negetive

characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features

negative

aspects.

First

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, forcing the architects to a specific building pattern may cause functional problems which can have a direct effect on the property. As an

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example

an item of information that is typical of a class or group

example

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, a local rule which states that entering the private parking space can be achieved through a side street rather than the main road may lead to serious traffic jams.

Second

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, several

desicions

the act of making up your mind about something

decisions

may lead to a substantial increase in the property value. In Jerusalem,

for

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example

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, all houses

should be build

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should be built

should build

using a specific stone leading to a massive increase in the

realestate

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real estate

costs.

Last

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, increased

regulation

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may

effect

have an effect upon

affect

the artistic

freedome

the condition of being free; the power to act or speak or think without externally imposed restraints

freedom

of the designers which can have a

negetive

characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features

negative

offect

a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon

effect

affect

on the cities

beauty

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and diversity.

In contrast

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to the above mentioned, I believe the advantages of housing regulations outweigh its disadvantages.

Initially

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, I strongly believe that a

municipal

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municipality

should maintain its cultural history. A recent report from the New York University has shown that an architectural consistency is one of the most important aspects

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the

citie's

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site's

cities

beauty

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and have a direct effect on the liveliness of the people who live within it.

Also

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, maintaining a specific landscape of a town by preventing buildings to be above a certain height effects the social interactions of the persons within it. People who live in

sky scrapers

a very tall building with many stories

skyscrapers

for

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example

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, tend to socialize less

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then

conjunction used in comparatives

than

people who live in two

store

Suggestion

storage

buildings.

Lastly

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, every city has its own

beauty

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which was kept for many centuries and in my opinion, should be looked after. In

cunclusion

a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration

conclusion

conclusions

consolation

Althugh

even though, in spite of the fact that

although

regulation

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may have a social and financial consequences, I still believe they should exist as they protect our cities.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

344 words

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There are fewer controls over the design and construction of home and office building. So, people can build them however they like. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages ?

Include an introduction and conclusion

In some countries, many people do not have enough money to access the internet. Should governments be responsible for ensuring that everyone can get access to the internet?

Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue that the money should be spent on improving living standards on Earth. Do you agree or disargee?

Some people think that learning news from newspapers is the best way. Others, however, say that there are more effective ways of learning news from other media. Discuss both points of view and give your opinions

Task 2- Childhood obesity is an increasing problem in Australia as many as two thirds of children are now obese. Schools have a responsibility to monitor what their students eat and the amount of exercise they do. To what extend do you agree to this statemen