Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The
loss
of some plants and animals should be seen as a main environmental problem because of its impact. For example
, the predators in the food chain cannot feed themselves when their
people in general
they
preys
disappeared. Some people said that we can feed ourselves with domestic castle and animals, so there is no harm to us. In fact, fisherman in some parts of the world cannot go fishing because of the Suggestion
prey
loss
of some particular types of fish such
as whale. Furthermore
, the loss
of wild animals and plants places
us under the pressure to build Accept comma addition
plants, places
zoo
to keep them safe in captivity.
Suggestion
a zoo
On the other hand
, we have been poised on the brink of severe environmental problems such
as water, soil and land pollutions or climate change that leave us more vulnerable than the extinction
of plant and animal species. Of course, those problems are main factors
that cause the Suggestion
the main factors
loss
of some species and put the natural habitat at risk of extinction
. Moreover
, water, soil and land pollutions make fresh water and agricultural land turning
into a monetary and political concerns on a global scale. Accept comma addition
land, turning
Also
, climate change causes more frequent natural disasters of extreme weather that make our life more unpleasant. We can save wild animals and plants from their extinction
, but the question is who can save us from ours.
In conclusion, I think that the loss
of some plants and animals should be worried, but it is just the consequence of more important environmental problems. I think we should concentrate our efforts on those problems rather than only focus on the animals and plants’ extinction
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite