Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The

loss

of some plants and animals should be seen as a main environmental problem because of its impact.

For example

, the predators in the food chain cannot feed themselves when

their

people in general

they

preys

Suggestion

prey

disappeared. Some people said that we can feed ourselves with domestic castle and animals, so there is no harm to us. In fact, fisherman in some parts of the world cannot go fishing because of the

loss

of some particular types of fish

such

as whale.

Furthermore

, the

loss

of wild animals and

plants places

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plants, places

us under the pressure to build

zoo

Suggestion

a zoo

to keep them safe in captivity.

On the other hand

, we have been poised on the brink of severe environmental problems

such

as water, soil and land pollutions or climate change that leave us more vulnerable than the

extinction

of plant and animal species. Of course, those problems are

main factors

Suggestion

the main factors

that cause the

loss

of some species and put the natural habitat at risk of

extinction

.

Moreover

, water, soil and land pollutions make fresh water and agricultural

land turning

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land, turning

into a monetary and political concerns on a global scale.

Also

, climate change causes more frequent natural disasters of extreme weather that make our life more unpleasant. We can save wild animals and plants from their

extinction

, but the question is who can save us from ours. In conclusion, I think that the

loss

of some plants and animals should be worried, but it is just the consequence of more important environmental problems. I think we should concentrate our efforts on those problems rather than only focus on the animals and plants’

extinction

.