Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals.Some people believe that this can not be changed,while others said that several action can solve this problem. Discuss both and give your opinion?

People activity
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A person's activity
Person's activity
Peoples' activity
sometimes has impact badly on the living organisms and animal.Someone
think
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thinks
that
this
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whereas I believe and
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
argue that takes
proper steps
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the proper steps
could be address
this
issue.In
this
essay I will discuss both sides and clear my view. It is true that, our activities are threatened for other creatures.We cut down
tress
a tall perennial woody plant having a main trunk and branches forming a distinct elevated crown; includes both gymnosperms and angiosperms
trees
of the forest for constructing industry and building, which has fall other species in danger.Because by cleaning
the wild
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the wilderness
areas we ruined the habitat of wildlife animals
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which creates
various problem
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various problems
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collecting food and living place.
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died
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dying
in a year for deforestation.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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