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The growing number of overweight  people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The growing
number
 of overweight  people is putting a
strain
 on the
health
care
system
 in an
effort
 to deal with the
health
 issues involved. Some people think that the best
way
 to deal with
this
problem
 is to introduce more physical
education
 lessons in the
school
curriculum
. To what
extent
 do you agree or disagree? The growing
number
 of overweight  people is putting a
strain
 on the
health
care
system
 in an
effort
 to deal with the
health
 issues involved. Some people think that the best
way
 to deal with
this
problem
 is to introduce more physical
education
 lessons in the
school
curriculum
. To what
extent
 do you agree or disagree? The growing
number
 of overweight  people is putting a
strain
 on the
health
care
system
 in an
effort
 to deal with the
health
 issues involved. Some people think that the best
way
 to deal with
this
problem
 is to introduce more physical
education
 lessons in the
school
curriculum
. To what
extent
 do you agree or disagree? The growing
number
 of overweight  people is putting a
strain
 on the
health
care
system
 in an
effort
 to deal with the
health
 issues involved. Some people think that the best
way
 to deal with
this
problem
 is to introduce more physical
education
 lessons in the
school
curriculum
. To what
extent
 do you agree or disagree?
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • obesity rates
  • health care system
  • physical education
  • instill
  • long term
  • raise awareness
  • healthier lifestyle choices
  • nutritional education
  • active transport
  • quality of instruction
  • facilities and equipment
  • diet control initiatives
  • community sports programs
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