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Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for development of poor nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Health
,
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,
 education and trade are considered
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 key for developing the underprivileged countries and it is the responsibility of government of richer nations to improve these three sections of nations that are below
poverty line
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the poverty line
. I partially agree with
this
 statement, in
this
 essay I will support my opinion.
First
 and foremost, underdeveloped countries can seek help of developed nations that
have
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has
 better economic conditions. As they can provide some financial help, resources for development, especially in case of technology that ultimately increase the education system. Even rich nations can install their projects in poor countries through which the employment can be generated.
Hence
, due to more employment opportunities economy of the
country
 will grow.
Moreover
, some projects in relation to farming as well as sectors may show a positive impact on
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the
 per capita income.
On the other hand
, even rich countries would not be able to develop
a
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an
 undeveloped nation until and unless the
country itself
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country, it
country it
 makes
a
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an
 effort to grow
it’s
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
 gross domestic
production
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product
.
For instance
, there is a
country
 named Cuba, it was the time when all countries had started withdrawing the commercial as well as social relationships and began to protest against Cuba, the transfer of essential machinery and hybrid seeds were banned by other nations. But the people of Cuba did not give up, they started cultivating crops with traditional farming methods and developed their economy. To conclude, in some cases it become necessary to take assistance from other
nations but
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nations, but
 it should not be a case
everytime
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every time
. The
country
 can
also
 make
itself
the thing named or in question
it
 self sufficient by modifying some procedures for doing different work.
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