Some people think that te main factors influencing a child's development these days are things such as television, friends and music others believe that the family still remains more important
In the present age, children have become addicted to electronic items, and
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to give more importance to their friends and favourite music. Many think these days parents have potential effects on a have a tendency or disposition to do or be something; be inclined
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However
, many people hold a strong belief that family plays a vital role in building a kid's character.
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For example
, due to the fact there are television and the internet, children nowadays have access to these much more than they used to in the past. In Linking Words
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way they will be able to upgrade their information. We can take learning Linking Words
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as an example, there plenty of precious an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
vidoe
clips on YouTube that perfect instructors teach grammar, vocabulary or speaking, which are extremely useful for all viewers, including kids. And there is another important factor that can the visible part of a television transmission
video
impact
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is friends. Studies have shown that children learn by seeing and observing what the peers around them do. Linking Words
Moreover
, friendship teaches adults how to be supportive and maintain the trust. Another thing that Linking Words
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child's character
is music. The benefit of music is it keeps children calm and relaxed, plus, sometimes motivated.
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a child's character
the child's character
On the other hand
, it is undeniable that family plays a vital role in their children's mental and physical development. Children and parents have unbreakable bonding owning to, they spend most of their Linking Words
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with their parents than with any other individuals. Suggestion
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Hence
, parents know which children-teaching methods are suitable in order to help kids reach their full potential. Linking Words
Furthermore
, family harmony is a crucial factor in Linking Words
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of youngster's personality. Suggestion
the formation
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growth up in a violate family, she or he might have mental problems. Suggestion
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Finally
, parents always want to bring the best things for their children so they will not harm them in any circumstance. Whereas, try their best to educate and bring sufficient life for them.
In conclusion, it is clear to me that social and family factors all have certain influences on the mature progress of children. Linking Words
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, in my opinion, family that can provide a supportive, secure and nurturing environment which is the most crucial to the way in which a Linking Words
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