People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems? Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?
Due to Urbanisation, people from all corners are migrating to
cosmopoliton
or growing or occurring in many parts of the world
cosmopolitan
metropoliton
cities, and nowadays, relating to or characteristic of a metropolis
metropolitan
this
figures are overwhelmingly increased, and generated countless issues, in which some are needed to addressed
Suggestion
to address
immediatley
, and others maybe later on. without delay or hesitation; with no time intervening
immediately
However
, we shall see the potential problems and possible solutions for overcrowding regions as follow.
On the one hand, there are numerous diffulties
an effort that is inconvenient
difficulties
for
being over-populated cities. Out of those, there are 3 major worries which are faced by civilians on Suggestion
of
daily basis
. Suggestion
a daily basis
Firstly
, traffic jam
is unbearable burden to individuals which keeping them away being punctual at their offices, schools and so on. Suggestion
the traffic jam
a traffic jam
Some times
to clear the way for vehicles takes more than half-day or even full-day. Suggestion
Sometimes
For instance
, It appeared in news paper
, that it took approximately 78 hours to clear a traffic in Shanghai in China once. Suggestion
the newspaper
newspaper
Secondly
, due to ever-growing immigration rates to cities have had consuming high amount
of water for domestic and industrial purposes on Suggestion
high amounts
a high amount
everyday
. Suggestion
every day
In addition
to this
, water bodies are declining at swift speed, which is like sprinkling salt on wounds for goverments
. the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
governments
Lastly
, whenever the monsoons arrived on over cities and they appears
like pools everywhere, because of poor Suggestion
appear
drainge
management, which makes hard for people to live on at those times.
On account of workable solutions, legislative members should allow channelling of resources and support to suburbs or towns for establishing new industries and institutions emptying something accomplished by allowing liquid to run out of it
drainage
instead
of focusing only on capital regions. Moreover
, this
infrastructures allow prospective investors to tap plural of "this"
these
in
those potential areas for harvesting an early-Suggestion
into
adopters
advantage. By Suggestion
adopter
this
governments can encourage people by generating many options to settle on.
In conclusion, Urban residents are facing crisis in many ways due to over mirgration
rates. In order to keep it at stable or the movement of persons from one country or locality to another
migration
minimimum
level, the rulers should focus on other towns other than cities only.the least possible
minimum
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