learning english at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages.if these are not taught,many are at risk of dying out.

english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
is most important to learn.
now a days in
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institution
institutions
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english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
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more important
at
school
rather than the local languages.
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english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
angles
and to survive the local languages.
in
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In
my view everyone should have to learn
english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
because now a days
this
language
is
most common
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more common
everywhere in the world.
without
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english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
we cannot go to abroad for higher studies.
learning
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language
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a language
at
school
days will be easier rather than avoiding the
language
.
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instance, if
we are attending a job interview we must know the
english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
angles
in order to communicate with the
interviewr
a person who conducts an interview
interviewer
.
so
to a very great extent or degree
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,
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when my
freind
a person you know well and regard with affection and trust
friend
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an
interview and he is not much known of the
language
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answers, but
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in
english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
learning the
english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
language
is most important rather than choosing local
language
.
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local
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also
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with
the living society.
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to a very great extent or degree
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learning
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the local language
language
at
school
is not
necesssary
absolutely essential
necessary
necessarily
because from childhood we are
communiating
the activity of communicating; the activity of conveying information
communicating
in the local
language
to our neighbours and parents.
so
to a very great extent or degree
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at
school
level we
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level, we
should learn the
english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
language
by
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make plain and comprehensible
explaining
exploring
it in
local
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the local language
language
because it will be easier to understand and learn the
language
.
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my
school
days when
i
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had attend
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had attended
to
being one more than one
two
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an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
classes
i
refers to the speaker or writer
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can't understand the
language but
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language, but
then
my teacher used to explain the meaning in the local
language
and it is easier to learn the
english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
language
.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
learning
local
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the local language
language
is
also
important in order to communicate within the local area.
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