Most modern families have both parents working and as a result children spend less and less time with their parents. What is the reason for this? What problems can this cause ?

Nowadays, in a society where lots of families are dual-income,
hence
, they do not have sufficient
time
to take care of their children. There is one reason that
lie
Suggestion
lies
behind parents to have no
time
to spend with their children.
This
essay will analyse that
this
issue can cause possible problems The main factor is that parents use their
time
up working in an office. Apparently, parents are working much more than a main part of
day
Suggestion
the day
whereby They strive to provide their children’s needs and giving them opportunities to get better education. Naturally, having worked for hours on end, they become quite run-down and want to rest to be prepared for
next
tiring workday.
For instance
, at 7
a
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
am
.
m
Suggestion
M
My
mother and father leave their home to go to the work and they return back at 7 p.m.
Consequently
,
although
either parents or their children want to do some
activites
any specific behavior
activities
with their parents or children, it is unfeasible due to reasons
that is
mentioned above.
As a
result child
Accept comma addition
result, child
-minding is used in these cases. If managed properly, it can be perfectly viable alternatives, but
otherwise
,
this
may call forth harmful trouble As for probable problems which failure to give
sufficent
of a quantity that can fulfill a need or requirement but without being abundant
sufficient
attention
to and spend
time
with children can make are several.
Fisrtly
Suggestion
Firstly
, parents give their children to look after to after-school
care but
Accept comma addition
care, but
it has to be advisable for parents to act as role models for behaviour by spending as much
time
as possible with their children,
this
means that not being with family may increase the risk of children
failing
decreasing in amount or degree
falling
victim to crimes
such
as abduction or coming under the impact of negative peer pressure.
Secondly
, parents are unable to provide emotional support. Due to lack of
attention
and care, they can be diverted their
attention
to some activities that may harm them
such
as drug
attention
,
alchocolism
habitual intoxication; prolonged and excessive intake of alcoholic drinks leading to a breakdown in health and an addiction to alcohol such that abrupt deprivation leads to severe withdrawal symptoms
alcoholism
and to play truant from school. To conclude, children must be attached importance like spending
time
with them, giving them emotional
suppor
give moral or psychological support, aid, or courage to
support
, assisting in their
scholl
an educational institution
school
schools
skull
assignements
a duty that you are assigned to perform (especially in the armed forces)
assignments
assignment
.
Prvoding
Suggestion
Providing
them with adequate
time
,
attention
, and love are primary to have a secure and harmonious family
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