The graph below shows the types of transport used by tourists who visited New Zealand from five countries in 2004. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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percentage

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of

tourists

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from Britain, Germany, Japan, Korea and Australia who used different modes of

transport

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,

such

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as

air

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,

coach

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,

car

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or

ferry

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when they visited New

Zealand

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in 2004. A quick glance at the graph is enough to make it clear that the

Japanese

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preferred

air

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travel

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the most,

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the other given countries used

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car

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the most. 60%

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British

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tourists

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and approximately 52, 50 and 45%

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German

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, Korean and Australian

tourists

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used the

car

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to visit various places in New

Zealand

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. The least

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of

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Japanese

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tourists

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(25%) used

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car

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to

travel

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around New

Zealand

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. The

tourists

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from Japan were the

most fond

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of

air

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travel

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. Roughly 55%

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Japanese

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of Japanese

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tourists

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used

air

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transport

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to

travel

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within New

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.

Air

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transport

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was used by 35%

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British

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, 30%

Korean

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and 25%

German

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tourists

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.

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only 11%

Australians

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of Australians

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used

air

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transport

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. A similar

percentage

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(20%)

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and

German

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tourists

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used the

coach

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,

whereas

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the

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of Koreans using the

coach

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was almost double (40%) than that of the

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and Germans.

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Coach

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was used the most (52%) by the

Japanese

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tourists

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,

whereas

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the least Australian

tourists

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(8%) used the

coach

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. Nearly 48%

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German

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tourists

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and 35%

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British

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tourists

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used the

ferry

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. The

tourists

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from

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, Korea and Australia were less than 15% in each case, who used the

ferry

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as a means of

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.

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coach

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the coach

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was the least preferred mode of

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among the

British

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,

German

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and Australian

tourist

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tourists

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,

whereas

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the

ferry

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was used the least by the

Japanese

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and Koreans.