In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?

Even though lots of development
have been built
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has been built
in
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on
agriculture, still many people are poor and starving throughout the
world
.
there
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There
are
plethora
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a plethora
of reasons behind
this
crisis but
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crisis, but
these demerits can be mitigated by taking some actions.
First
of all, it would be good to start by looking at some reasons
,
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,
why people still go hungry. The
first
and foremost reason is
war
. In details,
although
we are living in a modern
world
,
war
is still ongoing in the some areas of the earth, due to lack of understanding between countries. Syria take as an example
,
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,
having many
crisis
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crises
because of running
war
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a war
.
As a result
, citizen of that
country
are starving
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is starving
,
also
having many serious
deseas
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diseases
disease
.
Furthermore
, unfair capitalism is another cause of food shortage.
In other words
, in some countries, strict and uncontrollable economical issues
are exist
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are existing
.
That is
why, one party is getting wealthy and
other
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others
are going to be poor.
For example
, Nigeria, is facing problem regarding capital distribution to
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
dwellers. As a consequence,
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of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
economy is not that much growing what it would
expected
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expect
.
However
, there are various ways can be followed for
minimiznig
make small or insignificant
minimizing
this
problem.
Firstly
,
war
should be stopped by
negociating
discuss the terms of an arrangement
negotiating
between countries. Even though it would be difficult, by
compromizing
making or willing to make concessions
compromising
some benefits, we can bring peace to
this
universe again.
On the other hand
, the helping level could be increased from nation to nation. Which
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
mean, when one developed
country
offers helping hand towards a poor
country
that time underdeveloped
country
get many donations from healthy
country
.
Thirdly
, government should provide equal opportunities to
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
public.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
that
the poorer
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the poor
will not be poorer, they will get support. In conclusion, it can be said that, by controlling unequality throughout the
world
and
adpting
choose and follow; as of theories, ideas, policies, strategies or plans
adopting
adapting
aferementioned
being the one previously mentioned or spoken of
aforementioned
steps, people will get a healthier, starving free
world
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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