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solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. why is this? what are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

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Sun
energy
 becoming more popular as producing
energy
 to the houses in many countries. Solar
energy
 can produce
electricity
 without the need for
power
 distribution companies. The advantage of
this
energy
 is free of
cost
 and disadvantage
is it
Accept comma addition
is, it
 cannot produce the radiations in cold countries. Solar
energy
 is available free of
cost
 because
this
energy
 directly comes from the sun and there is no paid for
this
energy
.
when
Suggestion
When
 I went to my town after a long time and there I saw the solar panels are installed on the top of the roof of their houses.
Then
 I asked my uncle why have you installed the solar panels and
then
 he said there is a
power
 cut in our town and
then
 we decided to keep the solar panels in order to get the
electricity
 for many hours. The advantages are
this
energy
 is free of
cost
 and we know that the sun is a natural star which produces the solar radiations and
then
 we convert these radiations to
electricity
. In many areas, due to the increase in
electricity
 prices, some are installing the solar panels in order to get the
power
 generation free of
cost
. The cons of solar
energy
 are that it cannot produce the required radiations in colder countries. In colder countries, the sun will not produce the much radiations required to produce the
electricity
. So the solar panels cannot support in the cold weather nations.
For instance
, in colder countries like
iceland
an island republic on the island of Iceland; became independent of Denmark in 1944
Iceland
, there will be less available of
energy
 in order to use in the household. In conclusion, without the need for
power
 distribution companies, we can produce
electricity
 by using solar
energy
. The pros and cons are free of
cost
 and the radiations are not much available in colder countries.
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  • Climate change
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  • Energy security
  • Sustainability
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