Some people feel that it is always wrong to keep animals in captivity, for instance in zoos. Other people say that there are benefits for the animals and for humans. Discuss both sides of this debate, and give your personal view. You should give reasons for your answer, and include ideas and examples from your own knowledge and experience..

Zoos

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continue to be controversial, even now that they have evolved into ‘animal parks’ or similar facilities. Most people love

animals

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, and there are strong views on both sides, which I will discuss now. People opposed to

zoos

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highlight the unnatural way in which

animals

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live in

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places. For example, captive

animals

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do not need to hunt or raise offspring, and

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means that they are not living as nature intended.

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, the anti-zoo lobby

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out that

animals

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probably suffer mentally when kept in captivity, even if their surroundings are spacious and similar to

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natural

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. Symptoms of mental issues range from repetitive behaviour to eating disorders, and these are often seen in captive

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.

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, it is often said that

zoos

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add little to animal conservation, which is better served by preserving their

habitat

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, those who support

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say that in most cases they offer a secure and peaceful setting for

animals

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wildlife parks or reserves. They add that in many cases, the

animals

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would suffer from loss of

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or poaching in the wild, and in

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they are at least safe and able to breed successfully.

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, zoo enthusiasts feel that

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and animal parks are part of an integrated system of protecting

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, involving

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protection, breeding programmes and disease control.

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all helps to safeguard endangered species and

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preserve the global ecosystem for the future benefit of all life forms.

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, I feel that

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provide a valuable service to society and the animal world, as they help to protect many species.

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outweighs their possible disadvantages, as long as they are properly staffed and maintained. (281 words)