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Lots of people are throwing away food. What are reasons for this and how can food wastage be reduced?

Food
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 wastage
has been becoming
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has become
 a trending topic recently. It is because there are so many people throw away their
food
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. The source of these
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food wastes
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foods, wastes
foods wastes
 mostly from households and restaurants. In
this
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 essay, I shall provide some possible causes
on
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of
 why
this
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 phenomenon happens and give some alternative solutions for
this
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 issue.
To begin
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 with, the amount of
food
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 wastes
are increasing
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is increasing
 as “all you can eat” restaurants are becoming popular.
For example
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, some people cannot hold themselves for not putting
food
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 on plates more than their stomach capacity, so that that
food
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 often ends up being dumped
on
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in
trash
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the trash
. Another reason is that people do not care about the world famine phenomenon which should make them feel grateful for still can afford to have
food
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 on the table.
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 I am doubtful whether it is possible to reduce the amount of
food
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 wastes, I believe that those wastes can be recycled.
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, they can be made become organic fertiliser or alternatively the methane gas produced by rotten wastes can be used as
biogas energy source
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a bugs energy source
bugs energy source
. It only requires several simple items to make the
biogas
fraudulent; having a misleading appearance
bogus
biggest
bags
 processing tools, namely plastic tank, pipes, and other tools which can be found easily on the internet. In conclusion, the inability of people measure their personal portions and the lack of technology development related to
food
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 waste management make the
food
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 wastage issue becomes worse. I believe that by implementing the habit of measuring our
food
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 portions and installing simple
biogas
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 processing tools in each household and restaurant can reduce the amount of unprocessed
food
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 wastes.

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