Television dominates the free-time of too many people. it can make people lazy and prevent them from socializing with others. do you agree or disagree?

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often argued by some people, that spending leisure

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watching

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is not only causing for individuals to drift apart, but

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making them use energy much less. Whilst, others disagree and believe that

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is beneficial for both educational and fun-

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purposes. I tend to agree with the

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think that benefits can occur from

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if the act is used properly. It is commonly

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that generation

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nowadays enjoys

spending their

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doing nothing but watching TV.

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, parents these days prefer to let their children spend

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in front of

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, rather than taking them to engage in outdoor physical activities because

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, most parents enjoy the quiet place to relax even if the cost is over exposing their child to

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, as family members have different interests in type of movies, they spread around various

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for a proper talk.

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fact is evidenced by a recent statistics showing that 60% of families spend their leisure

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watching a movie

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of spending

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with other members.

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, if the

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of

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is spent wisely, it can be an advantageous method in learning interesting cultural materials. In a another meaning, a number of channels are specified to air educational and captivating shows that enrich the mind

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as the discovery channel and National Geography. In conclusion, effective results may occur from watching

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if it is well monitored, but not regulating

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and the right balance, it may lead to both communication problems and laziness.