It has become very common for people to borrow money. Most people have a credit card ,a mortgage and often they buy a car on credit card Al's well. Is this a good idea or is it too risky? Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

It is quite evident that nowadays people are often shopping more expensive things,
eventhough
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even though
they
donot
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do not
have a enough money. These are purchased by
different way
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different ways
the different way
like
credit
cards,
mortage
a conditional conveyance of property as security for the repayment of a loan
mortgage
and many others.
Although
this
idea
regarding purchasing on
credit
has a good
idea
, risks are
also
not negligible. So,
this
essay will be examined both the views in forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin
with, buying things on
credit
is
very good
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a very good idea
idea
. In
this
modern era,
credit
card companies provide an opportunity to their clients who want to buy various essential things though they
donot
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do not
have sufficient bank balance.
Therefore
, it is a very good opportunity for middle class people who
are most suffering
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are suffering most
from the situation regarding insufficient funds during their shopping time.
For instance
,
majority
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the majority
a majority
of people completed their dreams regarding purchasing their own car, after introducing the
credit
card facility.
Thus
, buying products on
credit
is a good
idea
for people who
dont
do not
don't
have
full amount
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the full amount
of money at shopping time. Indeed, purchasing things on
credit
is not only having good
impacts but
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impacts, but
also
it has various negative impacts too. On the contradictory approach, the major risk of
credit
is losing the ownership of products.
Similarly
, if customers are
failed
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failing
to pay the
installments
a payment of part of a debt; usually paid at regular intervals
instalments
instalments'
of total
credit
amount
then
credit card company
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the credit card company
take
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takes
their product and
also
sometimes company
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sometimes a company
puts their product on sale.
As a result
of
this
, people will loose their products.
This
same situation occurred on "home-buyer", because due to lack of fund, buyer had
choosen
one who is the object of choice; who is given preference
chosen
choosing
to purchase
home
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a home
on
credit
. After that, when they failed to pay
installments
a payment of part of a debt; usually paid at regular intervals
instalments
on time again and
again
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again, then
then
finally
,
company
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the company
a company
sealed their home and they
loose
fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
lose
their home ownership. In conclusion, after analysing the both views, I am
inclining
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inclined
towards the lateral view regarding
risk
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the risk
of
credit
because purchasing on
credit
will have
chance
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the chance
a chance
to loose our product.
Thus
, it is quite obvious that "how much you have, that much you buy".
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  • compelled
  • strategic financial decision
  • investing
  • property
  • cash flow
  • rewards programs
  • debt trap
  • servicing debt
  • exacerbate
  • financial strain
  • cycle of debt
  • personal responsibility
  • financial literacy
  • informed decisions
  • excessive borrowing
  • ill-informed borrowing
  • financial planning
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