Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Dedicating our life for working in the same firm for some people is their best choice.
While
(often used as a combining form) in a good or proper or satisfactory manner or to a high standard ('good' is a nonstandard dialectal variant for 'well')
Well
, there are some people who are
tend
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tending
to
work
in different places. In
this
cases
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case
, I believe by working in the same firm for a long
time
could show our loyalty.
Further
, working in some different places could
increase
our experiences
for
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of
in
working.
Firstly
,
Laboring
doing arduous or unpleasant work
labouring
in the same
office
for a long period could make the workers being
loyalty
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loyal
to their organization, it increases their responsible for caring about issues that happened in their organizations.
For example
, the workers who have been working for 8 years in a firm are
tend
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tending
to stay with their
office
at the
time
some problems occurred
to
Suggestion
in
the
office
, and
also
the will try to fix it since they loyal to their working place.
Moreover
, having a
job
in the same place for a long
time
could
increase
their ability in the specific
job
which they are done.
On the other hand
, moving to some
work places
a place where work is done
workplaces
for several
employee
Suggestion
employees
could
increase
their working experience since by working in the different places, it will
increase
their ability and
work
experience.
As a
result they
Accept comma addition
result, they
will be more responsive to handle a new
job
that they want to obtain.
For example
, some employee who
change
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changes
their
work place
a place where work is done
workplace
for several
time
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times
will be more responsive for accepting and handling their new
job
since they have some working
experiences
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experience
in different places.
Moreover
, they could be more
flexible to adapt in
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flexible to adapt
flexible to adapt to
their new
work places
a place where work is done
workplaces
. In conclusion, for several workers, dedicating their
work
in a same
office
for a long period could
increase
their
responsible
Suggestion
responsibility
responsibilities
and ability in their specific
job
.
However
, changing
office
for some employee could rise their working experiences. I believe that dedicating our life
for
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to
work
in one organization have more benefits than the other one.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • stability
  • loyalty
  • seniority
  • job satisfaction
  • rapidly changing job market
  • adapt to
  • work culture
  • career progression
  • network
  • diversity of experience
  • adaptability
  • career aspirations
  • dynamic nature
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