It has become very common for people to borrow money. Maby people have credit card, a mortgage and often they buy a car on credit card as well. Is this a good idea or this is too risky? Discuss both views abd give your own opinion.

Technology is developing day by day
.
Accept space
.
This
advancement leads to various changes in the society
.
Accept space
.
One
of them is card
money
rather than cash
.
Accept space
.
Bill paying
,
Accept space
,
owing
have ownership or possession of
own
house
,
Accept space
,
buying motor vehicles and so
on all
Accept comma addition
on, all
are possible with the help of credit or debit cards
.
Accept space
.
This
modernization has both pros and cons
,
Accept space
,
I will discuss both of these in the subsequent paragraphs with relevant views.
first
preceding all others in time or space or degree
First
and foremostly
,
Accept space
,
safety is
one
of the major
issue specially
Accept comma addition
issue, especially
issue especially
in the case of
money
.
Accept space
.
With the help of these cards
one
will be able to become tension free because they can carry credit cards with them rather than cash
.
Accept space
.
When they need
money
they can simply withdraw needed amount of cash through nearby ATM.
furthermore
in addition
Furthermore
, some people are not good
in
Suggestion
at
maths so there are always chances of
frod
intentional deception resulting in injury to another person
fraud
with
then
objective case of they
them
even by their own relatives
.
Accept space
.
This
thing
bring
Suggestion
brings
conflicts in the society to curb out
this
problem
this
kind of
money
is only a suitable solution. On the
flipside
Suggestion
flip side
,
Accept space
,
it has various disadvantages.
sometimes
Suggestion
Sometimes
it happens that
one
will want to transfer
money
in the account of their loved
ones but
Accept comma addition
ones, but
due to some hurdles it will deposits
in
Suggestion
on
account of unknown person
.
Accept space
.
This
will create several issues and misunderstanding in the society.
Moreover
,
Accept space
,
if
one
will buy products on the basis of credit card
then
they have to pay high interest on it
.
Accept space
.
To recapitulate
,
Accept space
,
in my opinion its merits
overways
Suggestion
over ways
the demerits and it is
also
clear from the above stated information.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
,
Accept space
,
I think that
it
it is
it's
a good development.
Submitted by arzumaster14 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economy
  • Invest
  • Future planning
  • Financial flexibility
  • Immediate access
  • Unmanageable debt
  • Financial literacy
  • Interest rates
  • Long-term impact
  • Good debt
  • Bad debt
  • Depreciative value
  • Consumer goods
  • Budgeting
  • Repayment plan
  • Emergency fund
  • Credit rating
  • Obtaining credit
  • Normalize
  • Advertising
  • Regulation
  • Responsible lending
  • Transparency
  • Financial agreements
What to do next:
Look at other essays: