These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country.

Nowadays, many people
wants
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want
are wanting
to visit for a brief period of
time
to the other part of the world to work or to study, There are
ennumber
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a number
number
of benefits to it, at the same
time
there are some
draw backs
the quality of being a hindrance
drawbacks
to it. It is a big learning experience for an
individuals
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individual
because, leading a life in abroad give an
opportunities
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opportunity
to exploring
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
culture, meeting new people and most importantly being
independant
free from external control and constraint
independent
. At the same
time
, cooking
food
and taking care of bills, To embark upon, Life is all about exploring and
embarcing
the act of clasping another person in the arms (as in greeting or affection)
embracing
new things, as life is all about knowing and learning something from people. There are different cultures and traditions in
this
world, at the same
time
there is a strong belief system for following or
embarce
include in scope; include as part of something broader; have as one's sphere or territory
embrace
this
tradition.
For example
, In India there is a tradition to have
bath
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a bath
in Ganga river after every alternate 12 years
tp
in the direction of
to
purify an individual soul, which is famously
calledas
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called as
"Khumb
mela
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Mela
". In ancient books knows as "
puranas
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Puranas
" says Lord Shiv used to visit
this
river after every alternate 12 years to purify himself.
In contrast
, living far away from family is hard to prepare tasty
food
for oneself and
looing
appearing to be as specified; usually used as combining forms
looking
after all finance related work. Living abroad far away from
famiy
a social unit living together
family
it is very
tought
the content of cognition; the main thing you are thinking about
thought
tough
tight
because since childhood preparing
food
taken care
by
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of
mother and father takes care of financial work. So, when suddenly one has to deal with is quite difficult some.
For example
, preparing
food
in abroad and studying or working at the same
time
required lots of
hardwork
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hard work
not everyone
are
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is
capable to handle both easily. To conclude, Though there are flaws in staying
abroad but
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abroad, but
benefits are immense to exploring
world
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the world
and knowing some
fasicinating
capable of arousing and holding the attention
fascinating
facts of other traditions outweigh all other small things.
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