Do you agree with Frank Zappa when he says that art is making something out of nothing, and selling it?

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Frank Zappa was correct in his statement that
art
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is the ability to produce something from nothing and gain attention for that. In our modern society, some will agree with him, that
art
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is nothing more than a process of creation rather than pure abstraction. Some people will disagree, understanding that
art
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is
creativity
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created
in its essence. There is no doubt that
art
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take
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takes
an important part
on
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in
our society. But not only as a cultural manifestation,
art
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has an important role
on
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in
economy
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the economy
. Music, paintings and movies can worth millions of dollars today. All of that wealth
have risen
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has risen
interests on the market over the years and was responsible for the development of
an
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a
specific industry of
art
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. Because of it, it is possible to see music,
for example
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,
been
the state or fact of existing
being
produced in large scale, for
an
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a
specific market or consumers. Even the term "consumers"
contrapoint
a musical form involving the simultaneous sound of two or more melodies
counterpoint
s
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
is
the the
definite article
the
view of "
art
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for
art
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". A single compositor can write many songs in a short period of time, using formulas that are more likely to be accepted by the public. In
this
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approach, the better you know your consumer, more your
art
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will be known and move valuable it will become.
On the other hand
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,
art
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can
also
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be the expression of pure creativity. Taking again music as an example, there is no doubt that Mozart, Beethoven and Bach did not use formulas to catch attention
for
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of
from
the public. Only because of their extraordinary gift for music and hard work, which is largely known, they became world famous.
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, none of them could enjoy the wealth that many less talented musicians can nowadays. For that,
only gifted artist
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the only gifted artist
only gifted artists
could produce true
art
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and
hence
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more accepted
art
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. For that reason, despite of
the the
definite article
the
gift or talent of the artist, the quality of
art
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depends on who consumes it. In my opinion, and agreeing with Zappa, the best
art
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is the one
witch
interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class
which
is capable to achieve the most number of people, disregarding the efforts of producing it.
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