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Some governments spend a lot of public money training individuals to be successful in international sporting events. Some people believe that this money should be spent on things that will benefit the general public instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, In most of the countries, the government funds ample amount of money in sports. Some of them are
aganist
in contact with
against
 to the concept while others support the point.
Let's
make it possible through a specific action or lack of action for something to happen
Lets
 discuss in detail regarding both the views. Coming to the support view.
Firstly
, Almost all the nations allocate ample amount of money on their players, in order to participate in the international games.
This
 not only encourage the sports, but
also
 develops the healthy relationship with the other country.
For example
, Players of rival's states meet in the game, have
an
Suggestion
a
 chance to reunite them.
Secondly
, Citizens tend to play more, as to reach to
global level
Suggestion
the global level
, will tend to increase their health.
For instance
, those who engage in outdoor
excercise
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercise
, will be
usual
Suggestion
usually
 have better body when compared to rest. Regarding the other side, their statements can't be neglected based on the few samples. Initial one is, Poverty, In every territory, we will find poor and are seeking for help. In
this
 case,
Instead
 of spending, huge amount of money on the it, it can be utilized for the development of the poor.
Next
, Development, The ruling party can lay roads and provide better facilities for the people, which may attract global organisations.
For example
, If we have Global standards of infrastructure,
then
multi national
a company operating in several nations
multinational
 organisations, will try to establish their branches and in turn cause benefit to the
localites
a surrounding or nearby region
localities
. In Conclusion, I agree
to
Suggestion
with
 the point, that the betterment of the people should be given preference
first
, rather than the extra
circular
of or relating to an academic course of study
curricular
activies
any specific behavior
activities
activates
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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