Every year large number Of people migrate from one country to another for different reasons discussed the advantages and disadvantages Of migration for the individual and for society as a whole
There are various reasons that huge quantity Of individuals move from one nation to another annually. It has some merits and demerits for a
person
and on a community as whole. In this
essay, I will be discussing both.
To begin
with, when a person
migrate
from a Suggestion
migrates
devoloping
relating to societies in which capital needed to industrialize is in short supply
developing
country
to developed country it
is very beneficial for him because he had Accept comma addition
country, it
better job opportunity
which helps them to live Suggestion
a better job opportunity
better life
. Suggestion
a better life
better lives
Moreover
, it also
helps society in economic growth for
example if
a Accept comma addition
example, if
person
is working he pays Tax to government which help to increase states
fund. Suggestion
state
In addition
,
some people Accept space
,
believes
that their children will have that better future in the developed Suggestion
believe
country
such
as modern lifestyle and good quality of studies.
On the other sides, there are some cons for an individual and society as well
Accept comma addition
well, such
such
as when a person
moves to a new nation it’s very hard for him to settle down. Besides
that migration also
decreases the economic growth of the country
from where one person
moves which created world inequality. On the top of that some
people start doing illegal activities to survive in Accept comma addition
that, some
new community
. Suggestion
a new community
the new community
For example
- drug dealing, working illegal
without work permits. Recently, in Canada a student got deported for Suggestion
illegally
act
against the law as he was working more than 20 hours per week as an international student.
In Suggestion
acts
conclusion I
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conclusion, I
pendown
saying that migration has its pros and cons side by side. Suggestion
pen down
Although
every year, there is increase
in amount of peeps migrating to other nations.Suggestion
an increase
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