Every year large number Of people migrate from one country to another for different reasons discussed the advantages and disadvantages Of migration for the individual and for society as a whole

There are various reasons that huge quantity Of individuals move from one nation to another annually. It has some merits and demerits for a
person
and on a community as whole. In
this
essay, I will be discussing both.
To begin
with, when a
person
migrate
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migrates
from a
devoloping
relating to societies in which capital needed to industrialize is in short supply
developing
country
to developed
country it
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country, it
is very beneficial for him because he had
better job opportunity
Suggestion
a better job opportunity
which helps them to live
better life
Suggestion
a better life
better lives
.
Moreover
, it
also
helps society in economic growth
for
example if
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example, if
a
person
is working he pays Tax to government which help to increase
states
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state
fund.
In addition
,
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,
some people
believes
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believe
that their children will have that better future in the developed
country
such
as modern lifestyle and good quality of studies. On the other sides, there are some cons for an individual and society as
well
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well, such
such
as when a
person
moves to a new nation it’s very hard for him to settle down.
Besides
that migration
also
decreases the economic growth of the
country
from where one
person
moves which created world inequality. On the top of
that some
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that, some
people start doing illegal activities to survive in
new community
Suggestion
a new community
the new community
.
For example
- drug dealing, working
illegal
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illegally
without work permits. Recently, in Canada a student got deported for
act
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acts
against the law as he was working more than 20 hours per week as an international student. In
conclusion I
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conclusion, I
pendown
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pen down
saying that migration has its pros and cons side by side.
Although
every year, there is
increase
Suggestion
an increase
in amount of peeps migrating to other nations.
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