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Some people think that it is parents who are responsible for teaching children to be good members of society. However, some people believe that it is the responsibility of schools and teachers. Who’s responsibility do you believe it is ?

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Who is supposed to educate children, parents or teachers
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?
 In
this
 essay, we will discuss the
role
 of parents and teachers in teaching children to be good members of society.
To begin
 with, I strongly believe that it is the
role
 of the parents to educate their children. Indeed, they are a
role
 model and children often imitate the behaviour and actions of their parents. Parenting is a difficult task and every parent should work full time on it
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 so that their children become good members of our society and be well behaved.
Therefore
, children will adopt the way of thinking of their parents,
for instance
, if they are racist, children might reproduce that behaviour at school and be intolerant
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of
 other children with a different type of skin or a different origin.
Consequently
, close relatives should
also
 educate them
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 so that it would offer different points of view while they are growing.
On the other hand
, schools and teachers are central pillars in
children
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children's
 education.
Besides
 their
role
 of improving children’s knowledge, they spend a great amount of time with them and learn to know them every day.
Hence
, schoolteachers are valuable assets via their bonding to positively influence them by making the right decisions and become kind and charming adults. Especially when teenagers are in perpetual conflict with their
parents but
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parents, but
 still need adult’s advices
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give a summary (of)
summarize
summarise
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 I strongly agree that both parents and teachers are, on different levels, responsible for teaching children patterns of behaviours and become good members of society.
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