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Some say you should always marry for love; others say that in an uncertain world it is wiser to marry for money. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience

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In the past generation, it was believed that marriage is between two
soul
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souls
 who are meant to live together.
However
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, these days people often feel marrying for
money
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 holds greater values than marrying the person whom you were in love with. I think, the latter has more weight. In
this
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 essay
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 will discuss both sides to
this
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 and the difficulties with men and women go through in general.
Firstly
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, few people are under the impression that
money
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 matter the most in their lives, as it is the source of bread and butter. Some feel that, being wealthy gives them prestige and pride. Taking the society as an example, people feel marrying someone who is rich would imply that they could lead a peaceful
life
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. They could have servants for their
houseold
a social unit living together
household
 work and sit at home like queens.
Forthermore
in addition
Furthermore
,
money
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 is considered as a subtle form of happiness and
this
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 is why people
fall
undergo an emotional sensation or be in a particular state of mind
feel
 as trap to it, as they get what they want at their fingertips.
On the other hand
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, some
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believes
 that
life
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 is just once and they should spend it with the ones who matter the most to them. I agree with
this
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, as
money
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 could come any day and leave you any day. On the contrast, feelings cannot be bought at any point of time. Taking an instance of my neighbours, who are married for 30 years,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 am
meamerised
having your attention fixated as though by a spell
mesmerised
mesmerized
 to see their understanding.
In addition
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 to
this
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, they have a son whom they love the most but they stay in a small house and are not quite well off.
However
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, they are
extreamly
to a high degree or extent; favorably or with much respect
extremely
 content in
life
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 and
this
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i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 feel is the aim of
life
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. To conclude, being wealthy is a part of living. Whereas, having
someoen
a human being
someone
 who cares for you for a lifetime is the ultimate success one can ever come across and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 personally feel people should not be daunted by
richness
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the richness
 of the society.
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