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There are many problems caused by mobile phones. What are the advantages of mobile phones? What are the disadvantages?

#phones
Mobile phones become so important in daily life in the recent years. They are used
for
Suggestion
For
 both business and entertainment Apparent 4, mobile phones change people's lifestyle a lot in both positive and negative ways, which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
Firstly
, people are easier to contact with their families with mobile
phone
, even they are
thousands
Suggestion
Thousands
 of kilometres away. Compared to letters or local phones.
they
Suggestion
They
 can make mobile
phone
Suggestion
Phone
.
any time
Suggestion
Anytime
Any time
 and anywhere with less money.
Furthermore
, it is much more convenient to get access to internet by mobile
phone
, which provide an easier way to study and collect information for whatever reason. The final feature is mobile
phone
 shorten the business meeting time by face-to-face video calls.
As a result
, for any daily meeting.
everyone
Suggestion
Everyone
 can join the meeting anywhere without travelling around the city and get the ideas of colleagues or clients.
Conversely
, the youngsters find it difficult to stop using their smart phones to play
phone
 games. Most games are addictive and costly which is
Samiliar
marked by correspondence or resemblance
similar
 to gambling.
This
 would lead to an unhealthy Lifestyle, if they focus
to
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
 much games,
then
 they might be lack of exercise and even isolated from the society. In conclusion, mobile phones indeed provide a lot of convenience to people's life. Meanwhile, if people are not self-discipline enough may not have a healthy lifestyle.
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